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30 June 2009 @ 08:35 am
Fic: I won't send you Roses.  
Title: I won't send you Roses
Characters: Jack, Ianto and mentions of the team.
Spoilers: Very very slight ones for 'In the Shadows'. However, if you haven't listened to this audio book, you probably won't understand the story.
Summary: Jack gets roses, but is it really what it seems?

This was written for my alphabet prompt table letter A: Anonymous given by [info]ilovedoyle
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“Call me dull, but I'd have stuck with the traditional red.” Ianto Jones, In the Shadows.


It wasn't everyday that Captain Jack Harkness walked into his office to find a vase of red roses balanced on his desk amid the paperwork, post it notes and alien artifacts. After all, they didn't particularly fit in with the general décor of the place. The last time didn't hold many good memories; Jack's own personal hell with added roses, however these were red this time; a positive thing, he was sure.

Jack stood with one foot inside the door, an old saying from the 51st century going round and round his head 'never look a gift Kimatu in the mouth', as he glanced around the room suspiciously, eyeing up the arrangement as though it'd explode any second before pausing to count silently in his head.

One.

Two.

Three.

Four.

Five.


With a soft sigh, Jack moved further into his office feeling safer in knowledge that if things hadn't blown up in the first five seconds then they usually wouldn't … usually being the key word. Even if they did, he'd be one step closer to finding the culprit, after he woke up anyway.

Shrugging off his coat, Jack draped it over the back of his chair before sitting down to inspect the flowers more closely.

Gorgeous red- Ianto red, Jack thought with a sly grin, Ianto looked so good in red... Jack shook his head; he couldn't get distracted - so obviously freshly cut

Sniff.

They smelled beautiful up close, but it hadn't filled the room yet so they'd been there less than an hour. He looked at his wrist watch: barely half seven so he could rule out one out of two team mates.

Being particularly careful of thorns, because although he may heal quickly, it didn't mean he liked being injured, Jack searched in vain for a card within the petals, but there was none. No card, meaning no handwriting in which to fully discover the sender, but who else would be sending beautiful flowers? With a manic grin, Jack stood up and practically ran to the office door.

“Ianto Jones!” Jack's sing-song call echoed around the Hub, but he still couldn't see the Welshman from here.

“You bellowed, sir?” Ianto said, coming up the stairs towards Jack, giving him a scare.

“Christ, we really need to get you a bell!” He always forgot Ianto was so quiet footed, even now.

“Jack, remember what we discussed, kinks are kept to ourselves and the bedroom.” Jack grinned again, leisurely kissing Ianto on the mouth. “And what was that for?” Ianto enquired.

“Putting roses in my office.” Jack stated with a sincere smile: sometimes Ianto could be so romantic and Jack, well Jack really wasn't.

Ianto shook his head, frowning. “Wasn't me, Jack.”

“No?” Another shake. “Really? are you sure?”

“One hundred percent, Jack, why? Who's been leaving you roses?”

“That's a very good question.” Jack turned and stalked back into his office, already he could see a card propped between two roses.

You've got everything wrong.” The card said simply.

The card slid out of Jack's hands as he stepped away and out of the room into the waiting arms of Ianto Jones.

“Are you alright Jack?” Ianto's voice faded into the background. “What's wrong?”

This was real: Ianto, his office, the Hub, the flowers; it was all real; it all felt so real … but was it really?

[Fin]

I've had very mixed responses from my betas, so whether you loved, liked or hated it, I'd really appriciate some feedback. Thank you :)
 
 
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pinkfairy727: Torchwood - Jack B/W[info]pinkfairy727 on June 30th, 2009 09:04 am (UTC)
I like it. I like the open ending where Jack still isn't sure he's stuck in hell and there's tiny little clues in it. At least, I'm assuming Ianto calling Jack 'Sir' is a clue as you're usually good about not using it post KKBB...yes, that's my one pet peeve that really shouldn't annoy me as much as it does.

One tiny thing- he could rule out four of five team mates. I think you mean three of four team mates, there's four colleagues plus Jack. :c)
mrs_cj_harkness[info]mrs_cj_harkness on June 30th, 2009 09:10 am (UTC)
Yes, very good :P and I totally agree, my other pet peeve is anyone writing that Jack calls Ianto 'Yan'.

LOL *headdesk* and even that's wrong - its post EW so should be one out of two :P *goes to change now*
Astuta: cream[info]astuta on June 30th, 2009 10:34 am (UTC)
Well, this is evil. Very fitting for the hell theme.

And to think that I thought that I finally found a fic were Ianto gives Jack some flowers... (I've been waiting for someone to write it since Jack said that no one ever gives him flowers)

Still, I quite like it. Jack's uncertainty its very tangible.

mrs_cj_harkness: Ianto (eating)[info]mrs_cj_harkness on July 3rd, 2009 07:02 am (UTC)
LOL thank you very much :P Hmm, I might have to write that now, y'know, to make you happy :P Do you have the exact quote??

Thank you yet again!
Astuta: Brokeback Torchwood[info]astuta on July 3rd, 2009 09:34 pm (UTC)
Really? *squeals happily* That would be amazing.
The quote is from the Captain's blogs:

Staff: Someone sent Toshiko a huge bunch of flowers. Nobody’s admitting to it, but we’re all convinced it was Owen - he protests too much. I never get flowers. I’m considering sending myself some, and pretending I don’t know who they’re from.

Lol, a little desperate of Jack.

Btw, Happy belated Birthday :P
mrs_cj_harkness[info]mrs_cj_harkness on July 3rd, 2009 09:46 pm (UTC)
yeah, can't promise it'll be any good but I'll give it a try :P

And thank you for the quote, I have to go read the Captain Blog again as I did love it ;D

And thank you very much bb!
Astuta: cream[info]astuta on July 3rd, 2009 09:53 pm (UTC)
Hey, don't be like that, I love your writing!
I usually don't comment much, 'cause I'm lousy (and lazy) like that.

James Moran is the man!

Most wellcome. :)
mrs_cj_harkness[info]mrs_cj_harkness on July 3rd, 2009 09:59 pm (UTC)
Hee aww thanks, I'm not very confident about my writing tbh so thank you.

oh yes.
Campaspe[info]cs_whitewolf on June 30th, 2009 05:41 pm (UTC)
I loved that whole idea in the audiobook, and you've pulled off tha sinister "is it? isn't it?" vibe very well in this piece. Poor Jack!

<33
mrs_cj_harkness: Martha (OMG spoilers)[info]mrs_cj_harkness on July 3rd, 2009 07:02 am (UTC)
Aww thank you hun, that means a lot to me.
Ahlai: jones[info]ahlai on July 2nd, 2009 12:01 pm (UTC)
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE

I think it's gorgeous hun, and I'm thrilled to see fic from you again :P *kicks own muses* I will write something soon, I will.

Also: your birthday present arrived this morning. I'll post it as soon as SP and Basement!Ianto are done with theirs. Part of me really wants to keep it though, it's sooo pretty *wibbles* Ah well, I'll just have to keep scouring e-bay for one of my own :D



Edited at 2009-07-02 12:03 pm (UTC)
mrs_cj_harkness[info]mrs_cj_harkness on July 3rd, 2009 07:03 am (UTC)
Hee! Thank you very much babe! I'm going to try writing more today, as I need to 7/10 prompt fics for my 101 things in 1001 days. But I'm working on it anyway. And yes!

Ebay FTW.